Monday, December 12, 2011
A better ending please?
Wow, you are so awesome :D Now on to the ending. This is your story so only you can really write it. I can't actually just slap an ending to your story and tell you there it is. You told me you don't remember I guess it's been a while. Do you remember nothing of how you feel then? I guess for kids, most don't think of death like adults do. I don't think you should just make up how you feel. I mean even if it's just plain, like you feel relieved you are finally out of the hospital or you are glad when your parents told you you don't have to be separate from them again. It's fine so long it's real. I rather read a girl's real feeling than some epic moving theme from a movie.
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